I have been messing around with science fiction and fantasy writing prompts lately. For one of the first I attempted, I wrote what I thought was a pithy, ultra-condensed 4-paragraph story. Then I looked at the prompt again and realised it was supposed to be 3 sentences long! Here are both versions.
The Uncut Betelgeuse Emerald
Petronella Caravaggio had escaped me yet again, I thought. She was almost at the gate. But then I remembered we were in 0.05 gravity. Without stopping to think, I vaulted over the turnstile and kept going, ricocheting off the curved “ceiling” in the centre of the docking hub. People scattered as I hit the floor on the far side of the spindle. I slid to a halt at Petronella’s feet, my neuralizer raised. “Freeze! You are under arrest for the theft of the Betelgeuse Emerald!”
The turquoise-haired jewel thief shot me a glance of pure poison, but she dropped her bag. “Fine,” she said. “I hope you have more joy with the blasted thing than I did.”
I got to my feet while keeping her covered and retrieving the bag with my other hand. (My old free-fall gymnastics teacher would have been proud.) But I was startled by a theatrical cough coming, not from the thief, but from the bag. The zipper was opening. Inside, the fist-sized green gem crackled with light. It spoke.
“I should clarify that Ms. Caravaggio has not stolen anything. She has merely aided my escape from the hideous realm of alien meatsacks that I have been trapped in for far too long. Or rather, she has been escorting one of my decoys. I, the real ‘Betelgeuse Emerald’, am already beyond human space. This remote will detonate in five, four….”
The Real Betelgeuse Emerald
As we struggled in mid-air in the centre of Docking Bay 14, Petronella’s bag split open and the Betelgeuse Emerald tumbled out. The fist-size gem crackled with light and spoke in a snarky voice: “Stop squabbling, you filthy apes, this is just a decoy. The real Betelgeuse Emerald is already far beyond Human space on the way back to her own people.”`
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